Not necessarily submitting for critique, but please tell me if you do spot something!
I’ve started uploading my novel to Kindlevella in bits and pieces while I try to clean up the tail end a bit more (I’m hoping to use any kindle vella money to help pay an editor).
It’s a fantasy adventure book about a girl named Asha who falls into a mysterious new world where magic is common and finds out pretty quickly that the sun’s been missing for a while. Hoping to make a full series for it, unfolding the world bit by bit as I go.
I’ve only got the first three chapters out right now (under 9000 words), but I update on Wednesday and Saturday. And hey, they first three chapters are free!
If you’re interested in at least taking a look, here’s a link. https://www.amazon.com/Longest-Night-Book-Village-Lights/dp/B0BYWGG162/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?crid=1MOJT0ZQTV0N0&keywords=village+of+lights&qid=1679354632&s=falkor&sprefix=village+of+lights%2Caps%2C259&sr=1-1
Thank you <3